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There lies an angel
                can you see?

The one with the wide gray eyes
                   afraid and abandoned,
                                 hungry and cold.

She clutches her slippery bare legs,
              the cold wind tousles her dull locks over one shoulder,
                            the thin fabric of her dress clings to her malnourished body.

There, beside her is the son of God,
                the one all too still.

And so, the children of heaven
                 go unseen and unheard,
                           their cries of pain and mercy ignored.

There lies an angel,
                 Unnoticed by the devout on their way to church.

There lies an angel,
                  And there she slowly fades.
©2009-2010 ~kobyinperspective
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Written a while ago. Note that it's not meant to be pointed at the religious, just everyone in general.

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:iconkobyinperspective:
Thank you! :)

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"I raise my voice to the music and madness, echoing the silence and soul of who I am." ~Michael Robinson

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:iconkobyinperspective:
Always glad to have someone enjoy it :D

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"I raise my voice to the music and madness, echoing the silence and soul of who I am." ~Michael Robinson

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:iconlyris-s:
That's lovely :3 And really all too true.

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I write for the same reason I breathe - if I didn't, I would die. ~ Issac Asimov
:iconkobyinperspective:
:glomp: Thanks!! ^^

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"I raise my voice to the music and madness, echoing the silence and soul of who I am." ~Michael Robinson

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:icondarkraven3033:
i love it, like all your writing.

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"You can always trust a dishonest man to be dishonest.Honestly its the honest ones you want to watch out for"-Jack Sparrow
"I see no reason to offer again what has already been rejected once"-Elenora-The Paid Companion ~BBxRae ~teentitans
:iconkobyinperspective:
:D Haha what would I do without your undying support

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"I raise my voice to the music and madness, echoing the silence and soul of who I am." ~Michael Robinson

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:icondarkraven3033:
idk, what would you? lol, you would do even better prob.

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"You can always trust a dishonest man to be dishonest.Honestly its the honest ones you want to watch out for"-Jack Sparrow
"I see no reason to offer again what has already been rejected once"-Elenora-The Paid Companion ~BBxRae ~teentitans

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